Imacow's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SM:SunMafiaIntro (Undone)]

Decent

-GOOD-
Well the main graphics such as graphics for characters were done pretty well although I noticed some of the backgrounds needed some work. The music was suprisingly good. It seemed to go with the flash well.

-BAD-
one thing I didn't likle was the huge "Join Us" in the top of the screen. It seemed more of a blockaid then an add. A simple one in the bottom right-hand corner would be fine. Other then the tank, the animation wasn't to interesting. I would of sugested using stick legs.

-OVERALL-
An Okay movie but room for improvment.

~Review Request Club~

RaspberrySun responds:

ok... the join us is supposed to be there,if not.. no one will see it. or join :P

[The Tape]

Okay movie

-GOOD-
The graphics were satisfactory although it realy shows that you made this in one night. I kinda enjoyed how you tryed to make it look as if you are the person dropping the change on the counter although it looked more as if you were looking though a telescope then through the viewers eyes.

-BAD-
Like I said before this realy looks like you skimped out of this and did it in a short period of time. The animation in this wasn't particuly great (mostly in the change dropping part). I didn't realy like how you used real picutres and static for the movie. It didn't look very good contrasting with the backgrounds.

-OVERALL-
An okay movie but you should of worked harder on this.

boner118 responds:

Thank you very much for the fab review. It's good to have a review that you can actually work from. You'll have to excuse the drawings (I am a terrible drawer (even the good ones took ages (that mutilated dude halfway through the tape took like an hour to get right).

Sorry about the eye thing (I didn't know how to make the shape, as if you think when you look there are no borders). I went for one long oval instead of two joined circles, but ye, as you said it looks like a telescope (it's exactly what my brother said).

Thanks

[The Newgrounds Tutorial]

Decent

-GOOD-
The music was a pretty good choice. It was good but it realy didn't have anything to do with the tutorial. I would of chose a techno beat like this only slower to fit your tutorial more. The information in this tutorial was mostly correct but there were a few mistakes.

-BAD-
Like I just said there were a few mistakes. The pictures you took were pretty blurry. I didn't realy like the fact that this was a slideshow insted of a "click when your ready" kinda thing. Another thing is that this tutorial has been done a million times.

-OVERALL-
a decent tutorial but room for improvment.

~Review Request Club~

Sidorio responds:

I'll try to improve.

[Christmas Sasquatch]

An okay movie

-GOOD-
The graphics were done nicely in this movie of yours. The characters were done nicely but some of the objects could of been done better. The music in the background was good and had a Christmas feel to it. At some points this movie was kind of funny.

-BAD-
The first thing I noticed about this movie was that after the nice NG preloader loaded and I was about to click were "Play" would apear the preloader vanished and the link to the NG holidays page was placed right there making you open the holidays page. Another thing I noticed after first glance was that the characters animation was realy just limbs moving around.

-OVERALL-
A good movie but lacking in some areas.

~Review Request Club~

Bretherin responds:

Thanks for your input, Imacow. I was messing around with the preloader for quite a while, and you're right.. that first play option that vanishes is annoying.

"-BAD-... the character animation was realy just limbs moving around"

The problem i had here was that I made each limb into its own symbol so that each limb could move seperately; therefore, when i wanted the character to walk, their limbs would move appropriately.

[The OmgZorz 1]

ok

-GOOD-
Right away I saw that the menu was a good bonus. You also had some extra features. The animation went pretty smoothly. I liked the themes and ideas behind this movie because quite frankly this is what happens in real life.

-BAD-
The graphics could have been improved. You could of added some backgrounds and voice acting aswell.

-OVERALL-
An okay flash.

~Review Request Club~

Twist-Chao06 responds:

Thanks. It was supposed to be a chalk effect, but, ill improve in No:2

[Sherlock Holmes: Xmas 06']

Pretty good

-GOOD-
All the perspective and graphics were done well in this flash. I liked the intro. The storyline and how you put Sherlock Holmes in the Christmas Carol. The voices were done well aswell.

-BAD-
Come of the characters looked kind of wierd and needed some sprucing up.

-OVERALL-
A great flash Good voice acting and good graphics.

~Review Request Club~

Pigmash responds:

Thanks for the feedback:)

[Untitled-1.fla]

Nice

-GOOD-
The graphics were good throughout this entire flash I like your style. The gradient on all the graphics made it look awesome. I loved the idea of this flash. There was plenty of humor all around in this.

-BAD-
The one thing i noticed was after the first part the cursurs went away. But either way you made it obious who was speaking. I also don't think the ending was very nice =(

-OVERALL-
Awesome flash I loved the idea.

RupeeClock responds:

The "cursurs", or tickers as I like to call them were removed because they usually indicate little effort, it's not hard to just have one of those talk. :P

And screw your opinion of the ending. >:D